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Wednesday, August 14, 2019

man and the mouse.


Once upon a time that gray haired old man set up a trap and he hid behind his coach. He was peeking out a little bit of the side of the coach. Then he saw a mouse that ran across the room and he looked happy. The mouse climbed up a bag on to the bench and the mouse went into the trap, so he had caught a brown mouse. He was happy then he did not know what to do so he put it by the window and it fell out. The old man saved the mows and he put holes in the box the mows was in. He put water on a bottle cap and slid it under and box quick put bread crumbs in the box through the holes in the box and the mows to the crumbs out of the box and the man. Lifted the box. Off and an mows looked mad at the old man he pretended that he ate. The crumb and. The mows looks sad at the man but it was just in his hand and he Gave it. to mows And the mows ran away with the crumb because the man tried to. Touch it and then the and Mows climbs onto the man and takes a breadcrumb and climbs on  To. the old man's elbow and sniffed his neck And then leaves the man opens his eye and he smiled 

(The end.)  :)

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jai, I really enjoyed how you used the word peeking to describe the mouse and what it was doing. This reminds me of when I had a mouse at my house that we needed to catch. Next time, make sure you format your writing before posting it to your blog.

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  2. nice writing Jai next time try to make your writing on the page

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