Here is my quick write:
Monday, September 6, 2021
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Hi Jai, Great quick write. I like your description of the the heart. I don't think I would hang around there too long either. Good work.
ReplyDeleteHi Jai, OH what a sight. That's a great opening sentence, it hooks you into the story straight away. The adjectives you have used are fantastic. I really liked how you described the intense heat,l could almost imagine feeling it myself. Great quick write.
ReplyDeleteHi Jai I like your quick write. Was this in lock down Because it reminds me of when i did a quick write in lock down. Maybe next time you could do one about ice instead of lava. Bye!
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